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英语高考真题 · 四阶段

28 道选择题(点选项即时判分 + 中文解析讲规则)+ 8 道大题(语法填空 2 篇 · 应用文 3 篇 · 读后续写 3 篇,折叠看完整答案)。 按 基础 → 中档 → 提高 → 压轴 四阶段编排,对应 60~80 / 80~100 / 100~120 / 120~150 分。

⚠️ 免责提示:题目按各省高考卷(新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷、全国甲/乙卷、北京卷、上海卷、天津卷、浙江卷、江苏卷等)的题型与命题风格整理改编,标注的【来源】指题型出处方向,不是逐字原题。学英语请以官方真题为准;这一页的重点是「这类题为什么这么选」。

四阶段怎么用这一页

阶段目标分核心考点刷题要求
阶段一 · 基础60~80时态、非谓语、固定搭配、词义辨析、冠词与代词7 题必须全对;错哪题就回去背那条规则
阶段二 · 中档80~100定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句、虚拟语气、倒装正确率 85% 以上;从句「缺什么成分」要能一句话说清
阶段三 · 提高100~120易混词、长难句、完形逻辑、七选五先判断逻辑方向,再选词;长难句先找主干
阶段四 · 压轴120~150语法填空综合、读后续写高分句、应用文要点选择题求全对,大题按「构思 → 写 → 对照范文改」三步走

💡 建议顺序:阶段一、二的选择题刷到 90% 正确率,再动阶段三、四的大题;大题一定要先自己写再看答案,只看不写等于没练。

阶段一 · 基础(60~80 分)基础

时态判断只看三件事:动作什么时候发生、是"点"还是"段"、有没有另一个时间作参照;非谓语只看主动还是被动、先发生还是后发生。这一阶段丢分,几乎都是规则没背牢,不是没读懂句子。

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大题 1 · 语法填空(基础篇 · 时态 + 非谓语 + 代词)

大题【全国甲卷·改编】语法填空

阅读下面短文,在空白处填入 1 个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式(共 8 空)。

My grandfather 1. ______(be) a postman for nearly forty years before he retired in 2019. Now he lives with us, but every morning he still walks to the old post office, 2. ______(say) hello to the young workers there. Last winter, a heavy snowstorm 3. ______(block) all the roads for three days, and no letters could be delivered. Grandpa put on his old uniform and, with a flashlight in hand, 4. ______(set) off into the snow. When he came back that night, his coat was wet through, 5. ______ the letters in his bag were completely dry. "A letter is not just paper," he told me. "It carries somebody's hope, and I have never lost 6. ______(he) patience with it." I often think of him 7. ______(walk) slowly through the snow, a heavy bag on his back. Perhaps that is the 8. ______(good) lesson I have ever learned from him.

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【答案】1. had been 2. saying 3. blocked 4. set 5. but 6. his 7. walking 8. best

【解析】

  1. 1. had been:句中有 before he retired in 2019(一般过去时),"当邮递员四十年"发生在退休之前,是"过去的过去",用过去完成时 had done。注意 be 的过去分词是 been。
  2. 2. saying:句中已有谓语 walks,say 只能降为非谓语;逻辑主语是 he,主动关系,且与 walks 同时发生,用现在分词作伴随状语。
  3. 3. blocked:时间状语 Last winter 表明是过去发生的动作,且与后面的 could not 时态一致,用一般过去时。
  4. 4. set:and 连接两个并列谓语 put on 和 set off,前后时态一致,用过去式;set 的过去式与原形同形(set-set-set),是本题最大的坑。
  5. 5. but:前句"外套湿透"与后句"信全干"语义相反,填转折连词 but(也可用 yet/while,但 but 最稳)。
  6. 6. his:空格后是名词 patience,需要形容词性物主代词修饰;主语是 I,但这里指"他对信的耐心",故填 his。
  7. 7. walking:think of sb doing sth(想起某人正在做某事),宾语 him 与 walk 是主动关系且表进行,用现在分词作宾语补足语。
  8. 8. best:后面有 I have ever learned from him(我曾学过的最……的),是最高级的标志;前面已有 the,只填 best。

【写法提示】

  • ① 先找谓语:一句话只能有一个谓语。有谓语的地方,括号里的动词一律往"非谓语 / 从句谓语"上想;没有谓语的地方,才考虑时态。
  • ② 再找时间标志:before / by the time / last winter / so far / since 决定时态,这比你读不读得懂全文重要得多。
  • ③ 纯空格(无提示词):只考四类——介词、冠词、连词、代词。先判断空格前后是不是两个完整句子:是 → 连词;不是 → 介词/冠词/代词。
  • ④ 名词前有空格:先看"可数不可数、单数复数",再看"特指不特指"(the / a / an),最后看是不是"谁的"(my / his / whose)。

大题 2 · 应用文(邀请信 · 提纲 + 模板句)

大题【新高考Ⅰ卷·改编】应用文写作

假定你是李华,你校将举办「英语戏剧节」(English Drama Festival)。请给你校的外教 Chris 写一封邀请信,内容包括:

  1. 活动的时间与地点;
  2. 活动的主要内容(班级短剧、莎士比亚改编剧等);
  3. 请他担任评委并给学生一些表演方面的建议。

注意:1. 词数 80 左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。

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【答案】(参考范文)

Dear Chris,
I am writing to invite you to our school's English Drama Festival, which will be held in the school hall from 2:00 to 5:00 p.m. on Friday, June 20th.
Eight classes will put on short plays, two of which are adapted from Shakespeare. Since you have directed several plays, we would be honoured if you could act as one of the judges and give the students some advice on their performance.
I would appreciate it if you could let me know before June 15th. I am looking forward to seeing you there.
Yours,
Li Hua

【解析】逐要点核对,缺一条就扣内容分。

  1. 要点一(时间地点):用 which 引导的非限制性定语从句把时间地点挂到 festival 后面——which will be held in the school hall from 2:00 to 5:00 p.m. on Friday, June 20th。这样一句话交代两件事,比自己另起一句省 8 个词。
  2. 要点二(内容):Eight classes will put on short plays, two of which are adapted from Shakespeare. 用「数词 + of + which」的非限制性定语从句,比 and two of them are… 更高级,也避免了两套谓语打架。
  3. 要点三(请做评委):Since you have directed several plays, we would be honoured if you could…。since 引导原因状语从句("既然"),would be honoured if you could 是委婉请求的虚拟语气,比 we hope you can 更礼貌。
  4. 结尾:I would appreciate it if you could… 是万能礼貌句(it 是形式宾语,真正宾语是 if 从句),后面 must 跟一个明确的时间 before June 15th,否则显得没礼貌。
  5. 格式:称呼 Dear Chris,(逗号)+ 落款 Yours, / Li Hua,各占一行。缺格式直接降档。

【写法提示】邀请信就四块,背下来能覆盖 90% 的题:

  • 开头(1 句):I am writing to invite you to… / It is my great pleasure to invite you to…
  • 细节(2 句):活动名称 + which 从句(时间地点);内容 + 亮点(two of which / including…)。
  • 请求(1 句):We would be honoured if you could… / I would appreciate it if you could…
  • 结尾(1 句):I am looking forward to your early reply. / Looking forward to seeing you there.
  • 提分点:全文至少放一个从句 + 一个非谓语。本文是「which 定语从句 + 数词 of which + since 状语从句 + if 虚拟」四连,评分时句式分稳。

阶段二 · 中档(80~100 分)中档

从句题只有一句口诀:先看从句里缺什么成分。缺主语/宾语/表语 → 关系代词或 what;不缺成分 → 关系副词、that、whether 或连词。虚拟与倒装则是"背结构 + 认标志词"。

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大题 3 · 语法填空(从句 + 虚拟篇)

大题【新高考Ⅱ卷·改编】语法填空

阅读下面短文,在空白处填入 1 个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式(共 8 空)。

The little bookshop 1. ______ stands at the corner of our street has been there for over sixty years. Its owner, Mr. Allen, is a man 2. ______ patience seems endless. 3. ______ I like most about the shop is not the books but the silence inside it. The question I really wanted to ask him was 4. ______ he had ever thought of selling the place. He smiled and said, "If I 5. ______(sell) it, the street would lose its memory." 6. ______ he earns little, he has never raised the rent of the reading corner. Every child 7. ______ comes in is allowed to sit there as long as he or she likes. It is a place 8. ______ time seems to stand still.

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【答案】1. which/that 2. whose 3. What 4. whether 5. sold 6. Though/Although 7. who/that 8. where

【解析】

  1. 1. which/that:先行词 the little bookshop 指物,从句 stands 前缺主语,用关系代词 which 或 that。判定方法:把先行词塞回去——The bookshop stands at the corner,句子完整且缺主语,所以是"关系代词作主语"。
  2. 2. whose:空格后是名词 patience,从句主语是 patience,缺的是"谁的"这一层定语,用 whose(= his patience)。who 不能直接带名词,这是最常见的错。
  3. 3. What:主语从句,从句里 like 缺宾语(I like ___ most),没有先行词可选,用 what(= the thing that)。若填 That,从句必须自己完整,这里缺宾语,故错。
  4. 4. whether:表语从句表示"是否"。表语从句不能用 if,这是硬规则(本句主语是 The question,更是明显的"是否"语境)。若填 that,语义变成"问题是(他确实想过)",与下文他笑着回避的语气不符。
  5. 5. sold:If 引导的虚拟条件句,主句是 would lose(与现在事实相反),从句用一般过去时;sell 与 I 是主动关系,故填 sold(不是 were sold)。
  6. 6. Though/Although:前后"挣得少"与"从未涨租金"是让步关系,且引导的是完整从句,句首用 Though/Although。注意不能与 but 连用(× Although he earns little, but…)。
  7. 7. who/that:先行词 every child 指人,从句缺主语,用 who 或 that。注意 every child 作先行词时虽然语义是复数,但仍按单数处理,故后面是 comes / is allowed。
  8. 8. where:先行词 a place 表地点,从句 time seems to stand still 主谓完整,缺地点状语,用关系副词 where(= in which)。对比:a place (which) I have never visited —— 缺宾语才用 which。

【写法提示】

  • 定语从句两步走:① 先行词指人还是指物;② 把先行词代回从句,看缺主/宾/定还是缺状语。缺状语(时间、地点、原因)→ when/where/why;缺"谁的 + 名词"→ whose。
  • 名词性从句一步走:从句本身完整 → that(无义)或 whether(是否);从句缺成分 → what(缺主/宾)、which(有范围)、who(指人)。
  • 表语从句 / 主语从句 / 同位语从句里表"是否"一律用 whether,只有宾语从句才可以用 if。
  • 虚拟三张表:与现在相反 → 从句 did,主句 would do;与过去相反 → 从句 had done,主句 would have done;与将来相反 → 从句 were to do / should do,主句 would do。

大题 4 · 应用文(通知 · 格式 + 模板句)

大题【浙江卷·改编】应用文写作

假定你是校学生会主席李华。为鼓励同学们多读书,学生会将举办「校园读书周」(Campus Reading Week)。请写一则英文通知,内容包括:

  1. 活动目的、时间与地点;
  2. 活动内容(书展、读书分享会、演讲比赛);
  3. 报名方式与注意事项。

注意:1. 词数 80 左右;2. 通知的格式已为你写好,不计入总词数。

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【答案】(参考范文)

Notice
In order to encourage students to read more, the Student Union is to hold a Campus Reading Week from May 12th to May 18th.
The activity will include a book fair in the library hall, a reading-sharing session every afternoon at 4:30, and a speech contest on the last day. All students are welcome to take part. Those who wish to enter the speech contest are requested to sign up at the Student Union office before May 8th.
Please be on time and bring your student card. For more information, call 12345678.
The Student Union
May 5th

【解析】

  1. 标题 Notice:居中单独一行、首字母大写,不写 Dear…,这是通知与书信最大的格式区别。
  2. 目的 + 时间地点:In order to…, the Student Union is to hold…。be to do 表示"按计划将要",比 will 更正式,是通知体的标志句式。
  3. 活动内容:三项用 include A, B, and C 并列,每项都带"名词 + 介词短语"的修饰(in the library hall / every afternoon at 4:30 / on the last day),避免三个光秃秃的名词堆在一起。
  4. 报名方式:Those who wish to enter the speech contest are requested to sign up…。Those who… 是通知里最省字的"对象限定"写法,are requested to 比 must 礼貌且正式。
  5. 注意事项 + 落款:Please be on time 是祈使句收尾;落款单位(The Student Union)和日期(May 5th)各占一行,缺一扣格式分。

【写法提示】通知的骨架固定,四句话就能撑起 80 词:

  • 第一句(目的):In order to…, … is to be held / will take place…
  • 第二句(内容):The activity will include…, … and ….
  • 第三句(要求):All students are welcome to… / Those who… are requested to… before + 日期.
  • 第四句(提醒):Please be on time and bring… / For more information, call…
  • 提分点:通知里放一个 Those who 定语从句 + 一个 be to do,句式分立刻不同;三个并列项务必各带一个介词短语,这是"内容具体"的证据。

阶段三 · 提高(100~120 分)提高

这一阶段不再考"懂不懂规则",而考词准不准、逻辑顺不顺。易混词看"及物不及物"和"词性";完形与七选五看同向还是反向——先定逻辑,再选词。

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大题 5 · 读后续写(前 40 分的关键:情节要"接得上")

大题【新高考Ⅰ卷·改编】读后续写

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

It was the last day of the school science fair. Emma had spent three months building a small robot that could water plants. But when she plugged it in, nothing happened. The little machine stood still, its lights dark. The judges were already moving towards the next table, and Emma felt her face burn. She began to gather her things, hoping nobody would notice her.

Paragraph 1:Just as she was about to give up, her teacher Mr. Lee knelt down beside her.

Paragraph 2:When the result was announced, Emma could hardly believe her ears.

注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;2. 应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语(本题以情节连贯为准);3. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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【答案】(参考范文 · 约 150 词)

Paragraph 1: Just as she was about to give up, her teacher Mr. Lee knelt down beside her. He did not say a word at first; he simply turned the robot over and pointed at a loose wire near the battery. "Try this one," he said quietly. Emma's hands were shaking, but she pushed the wire back into its place. Suddenly a small green light blinked, and the robot's arm rose slowly, dropping a few drops of water onto the little plant beside it. Emma let out a breath she had not realised she was holding. Mr. Lee patted her shoulder and stepped back into the crowd.

Paragraph 2: When the result was announced, Emma could hardly believe her ears. Her name was called first. As she walked to the front, the hall seemed to hold its breath. The judge shook her hand and said that a machine which worked after failure was worth more than one that had never been tested. Emma looked back at Mr. Lee, who was smiling at her from the back of the room. It was that smile, not the medal, that she remembered years later.

【解析】续写不是"随便写两段话",而是"把原文留下的问题解决掉"。

  1. 抓原文的"缺口":原文给了三个信息——机器人三个月做成、插电后完全不亮、评委正要走。缺口就是"为什么不亮"。第一段必须回答这个物理原因,否则读者不服。范文的答案是 a loose wire(接头松了),最省事也最可信。
  2. 第一段的动作链:蹲下 → 翻过来 → 指线 → 说一句 → 她手抖着插回去 → 绿灯亮 → 机械臂抬起来 → 滴水。全程用动作推进,不用形容词喊情绪;情绪只留一句 she let out a breath she had not realised she was holding(非限制性定语从句),比 she was very nervous 高级十倍。
  3. 第二段必须"兑现"段首句:段首句说 cannot believe her ears(不敢相信自己的耳朵),那就必须是好消息——第一名。若写成"她没得奖但学到了道理",与段首句的情感方向矛盾,属于严重跑题。
  4. 首尾呼应(闭环):原文提到 the judges;结尾就回到评委那句评价——a machine which worked after failure 与 "nothing happened" 形成对照。最后一句 It was that smile, not the medal, that… 用强调句把主题从"奖"抬到"人",这是 40 分档的收尾。
  5. 时态统一:全篇一般过去时(叙述),只有人物直接引语里可以用现在时("Try this one," he said)。时态跳来跳去是续写最常见的扣分点。

【写法提示】三个可直接套用的高分句型,每段各放一个:

  • ① 非谓语作伴随/原因:Having checked every wire twice, she finally found the loose one.(先发生用 Having done)
  • ② with 复合结构写画面:She stood there, with her heart beating wildly and her notes shaking in her hand.(with + 宾语 + doing/done,一句写两个细节)
  • ③ 倒装写"才明白":Only then did she realise that failure was part of the experiment.(Only + 状语置句首要部分倒装)
  • 段落结构建议:每段 5~7 句 = 1 句承接段首 + 2 句动作 + 1 句感官/环境 + 1 句心理 + 1 句收束。第二段最后一句务必"回头看",回到原文出现过的人、物或场景。

大题 6 · 应用文(建议信 · 三条建议的写法)

大题【北京卷·改编】应用文写作

假定你是李华,你的英国朋友 Chris 发来邮件说他正在学中文,但觉得汉字太难、进步很慢,想放弃。请你给他回一封邮件,内容包括:

  1. 表示理解并鼓励他;
  2. 给出两条具体可行的学习方法;
  3. 表达祝愿。

注意:1. 词数 80 左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。

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【答案】(参考范文)

Dear Chris,
I am glad to hear from you, though I am sorry that Chinese characters are giving you such a hard time. Every learner feels the same in the first few months, so please do not give up.
First of all, learn five new characters a day and review them the next morning; small steps work better than long hours. What's more, watch Chinese cartoons with subtitles, which teach you how people really speak instead of how textbooks speak.
Keep practising, and you will find the characters familiar before long. I am always here if you need help.
Yours,
Li Hua

【解析】

  1. 要点一(理解 + 鼓励):though I am sorry that… 用 though 引导的让步状语从句把"高兴收到信"和"为你发愁"放在一句里,比两句更紧凑;Every learner feels the same in the first few months 是"共情句",比 You should not worry 有效得多。
  2. 要点二(方法,必须具体):建议信最容易失分的地方是"空话"——写 Study harder 等于没写。范文给的是可执行的动作:五个字 + 第二天复习(数量 + 时间)、看带字幕的动画片(具体材料 + 理由)。两条建议都用"祈使句 + 分号 + 理由"的写法。
  3. 第三条建议的处理:把"不要怕犯错"合进理由句里(instead of how textbooks speak),既省字数又显得有想法;若时间够,可再加一句 do not be afraid of making mistakes; native speakers are usually happy to correct you.
  4. 要点三(祝愿):Keep practising, and you will find the characters familiar before long.「祈使句 + and + 陈述句」= if 条件句的等价写法,比 You will succeed 有说服力。
  5. 连接词:First of all / What's more 两句之间必须有,这是"连贯"这一维度的直接得分点。

【写法提示】建议信模板(80 词够用):

  • 开头:I am glad to hear from you, though I am sorry that… / I quite understand how you feel.
  • 建议一:First of all, it would be a good idea to…(+ 理由)
  • 建议二:What's more, why not…? / You may find it helpful to…(+ 理由)
  • 结尾:Keep practising, and you will… / I hope you will find these suggestions useful.
  • 提分点:每条建议后面必须跟一个理由(because / which 从句),只有建议没有理由是 15 分与 20 分的分界线。

阶段四 · 压轴(120~150 分)压轴

压轴题考的是综合:一句话里同时压着时态、语态、非谓语和从句;一篇续写里同时要情节合理、句式高级、时态统一。到这一层,做题靠"结构意识"而不是"语感"。

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大题 7 · 读后续写(困境救助类 · 情节与情感双线)

大题【新高考Ⅱ卷·改编】读后续写

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Old Mr. Harper lived alone at the end of our lane with a brown dog called Scout. Every evening he walked to the top of the hill and back, whatever the weather. That winter the river rose faster than anyone could remember. At midnight the phone in our kitchen rang: it was Mr. Harper, and his voice was shaking. "Scout is missing," he said. "And the water is already at my door."

Paragraph 1:My father grabbed his coat and a flashlight, and we ran out into the rain.

Paragraph 2:When we finally got back to the lane, the rain had stopped and the sky was turning grey.

注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;2. 续写应围绕"救人"与"找狗"两条线索展开。

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【答案】(参考范文 · 约 155 词)

Paragraph 1: My father grabbed his coat and a flashlight, and we ran out into the rain. The lane had turned into a shallow stream, and the water pulled at our ankles with every step. We shouted Scout's name, but the wind carried our voices away. Halfway up the hill my father stopped and pointed: a wet brown shape was standing under the old oak tree, shivering and barking at the rising river. Scout had run off in fear, and now he was too frightened to come down. My father climbed up slowly, talking to him in a low, steady voice, while I held the light on the two of them.

Paragraph 2: When we finally got back to the lane, the rain had stopped and the sky was turning grey. My father wrapped Scout in his coat and carried him, and I ran ahead to knock on Mr. Harper's door. He was standing in the doorway with water around his knees, holding a stick he did not need. When he saw the brown shape in my father's arms, he dropped the stick and held the dog with both hands, saying nothing at all. The next morning the sun came out, and the old man and his dog sat on the hill again, as if that night had never happened.

【解析】

  1. 两条线要同时推进:题目提示"救人 + 找狗"。第一段走"找狗"线(喊名字、发现、靠近),第二段走"送回 + 救人"线(敲门、老人还站在水里、接过狗)。如果第一段只顾找狗、把老人忘掉,结尾就没有落点。
  2. 第一段的三个动作节点:① 环境立刻升级(lane had turned into a shallow stream——过去完成时写"已经变成了",比 The lane was a stream 更有时间纵深感);② 声音失效(the wind carried our voices away——写"找不到"的具体原因,而不是干说 we could not find it);③ 发现 + 难题(狗在树上却不敢下来),把"找到"与"救下"分开,情节才有起伏。
  3. 第二段的"沉默"比呐喊有力:he dropped the stick and held the dog with both hands, saying nothing at all。老人没说话,读者却全懂了——这是续写里"以动作代替抒情"的核心技巧。
  4. 首尾呼应:原文第一句是 Every evening he walked to the top of the hill and back。结尾就让他"又坐在山上"(sat on the hill again),场景闭环;as if that night had never happened 用虚拟语气收束,情绪克制而有余味。
  5. 时态与语态:全篇一般过去时;the lane had turned / Scout had run off 用过去完成时交代"在我们到达之前",这是拉开叙事层次的关键,也是评分时"语法丰富"的证据。

【写法提示】

  • ① 环境句开头,制造紧张:The lane had turned into a shallow stream, and the water pulled at our ankles.(过去完成 + 拟人动词 pull)
  • ② 视觉细节定镜头:a wet brown shape was standing under the old oak tree, shivering and barking(先给"形状"再给"是什么",镜头感来自"不直接点名")
  • ③ 用"无声"写情感:He said nothing at all, but his hands would not let go of the dog.
  • ④ 结尾回扣原文物象:hill / lane / the old oak tree 至少回收一个,形成闭环。切忌结尾另起一个新场景。
  • 失分预警:不要让主角"突然出现超能力";不要让狗自己跑回家(等于取消第一段全部努力);不要在结尾写大段议论(续写要"演"出来,不要说教)。

大题 8 · 读后续写(成长突破类 · 心理描写)

大题【天津卷·改编】读后续写

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Nora had never liked the front of the classroom. When her teacher announced that everyone would give a three-minute talk about a person they admired, her stomach dropped. She chose her grandmother, who had taught herself to read at fifty and now ran a small bookshop. But on the morning of the talk, she stood outside the classroom door, her notes shaking in her hand, and could not make herself go in.

Paragraph 1:Then the door opened, and Mei, who sat behind her, slipped out into the corridor.

Paragraph 2:When she finished, the classroom was silent for a moment, and then the clapping began.

注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;2. 续写应体现 Nora 由"害怕"到"完成"的心理变化。

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【答案】(参考范文 · 约 155 词)

Paragraph 1: Then the door opened, and Mei, who sat behind her, slipped out into the corridor. She did not ask any questions; she simply stood beside Nora and said, "I get scared too. Let's go in together." Nora looked down at her notes, then at the clock at the end of the corridor. Nothing in them promised that she would not fail. But Mei was already holding the door open, and that small, ordinary kindness somehow made the decision for her. She walked in, and the whole classroom turned towards her at once.

Paragraph 2: When she finished, the classroom was silent for a moment, and then the clapping began. Her teacher nodded slowly, and someone in the back row whistled. Nora found that her hands were still trembling, but her voice, once it had started, had carried her all the way to the end. She had talked about a woman who learned to read at fifty, and now she understood a little of what that courage must have cost. On the way home she called her grandmother, and for the first time she told her the whole story.

【解析】

  1. 心理变化必须"分三段走":害怕(原文)→ 犹豫(第一段:看笔记、看钟、Nothing promised that she would not fail)→ 行动(第一段末:someone made the decision for her)→ 完成后的余震(第二段:hands were still trembling)。切忌一进教室就"突然自信",那是假的情节。
  2. 救场的人不能抢戏:Mei 只做两件事——站在旁边、说一句 I get scared too,然后开门。她的作用是"降低门槛",真正的行动仍是 Nora 自己走进教室。写成 Mei 替她讲,就跑题了。
  3. 第二段要"回扣主题":原文说的是 grandmother taught herself to read at fifty。结尾必须把"她的演讲内容"与"她此刻的理解"接上——now she understood a little of what that courage must have cost(must have done 表对过去的肯定推测)。这一句是全文的立意所在。
  4. 细节的一致性:her notes shaking(原文)→ 第一段 still holding the notes → 第二段 hands were still trembling。同一细节贯穿两段,形成"伏笔—照应"。
  5. 结尾动作化:不写 She felt proud of herself,而写 she called her grandmother, and for the first time she told her the whole story——打电话这个动作,比任何形容词都更能说明她变了。

【写法提示】心理描写三件套(每个续写都能用):

  • ① 生理反应代替形容词:Her hands were still trembling; she could hear her own heartbeat.(不写 she was nervous)
  • ② 内心独白用"否定 + 转折":Nothing in them promised that she would not fail. But…(先承认害怕,再行动,人物才真实)
  • ③ 时间状语从句拉长时间感:her voice, once it had started, had carried her all the way to the end(once 引导的时间状语从句 + 过去完成时)
  • 万能收尾三种:动作收尾(打电话/握手/回头)、环境收尾(sun came out / the sky was turning grey)、议论收尾(一句即可,不超过 15 词)。
  • 字数控制:每段 75~80 词、5~7 句最稳;一段写不到 60 词会被判"内容单薄"。

最后一页:这四阶段怎么刷最有效

  1. 先刷选择题,不碰大题。28 题刷两遍:第一遍当诊断(错哪类记下来),第二遍只做错的那几类。语法题的错因九成是"规则记混",不是"看不懂"。
  2. 大题一定要动笔。语法填空先自己填完再看答案,对照时只问一句:"我漏的是提示词还是空格位置?"——漏提示词是词汇问题,漏空格是结构问题。
  3. 应用文背模板句,但别背整篇。开头 1 句 + 请求 1 句 + 结尾 1 句,三句固定,中间按题目要点填。模板句用得越少越自然,用得对了就是分。
  4. 读后续写每篇只练一个点。这一页三篇分别练:动作链(科学展)、以无声写情感(洪水)、心里独白(演讲)。写完对照范文,只改一处——改太多记不住。
  5. 时态是底线。续写全篇过去时,应用文按题目语境定(邀请信一般将来、通知 be to do、建议信现在时为主)。时态一乱,内容再好也进不了高档。

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